CharlieMae @ St Francis of Assisi

Thursday, August 26, 2021

In the OG family we where talking about Persuasive writing, Here is my example
of persuasive writing on why Dog are better than Cats.

The first thing you can do is greet them like good morning or good afternoon.

It needs to be something positive because we want the writer to feel proud for what they have done.

Then you can say something like maybe next time you can add some more information.

After that you can ask a question.

Fun Facts

Hens are girls and roosters are boys

Hens can be different colours

Hens lay eggs

Hens can fly up to 600 meters ( 200 ft )

They cut there wings so they wont fly away

They have orange red becks

Do you know any fun facts about hens?

This week in OG 4 our create task was to make some realistic embarrassing moments in and out our school, Here are some off mine embarrassing moments.

This is a link to a book that is called so Embarrassing

This week we have been learning fractions this is an example of my work.

In the last two weeks we have been learning about how to stop bullying and we made a poster. This is an example. Are you a up stander or bystander?

I have been learning how to comment on a blog. A comment should be positive caring and thoughtful.

I feel great that I got a good comment thank you I feel so sad that Amy made fun of my blog post.

I love getting good blog comments. Do you?