In the OG family we where talking about Persuasive writing, Here is my example
of persuasive writing on why Dog are better than Cats.
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, August 26, 2021
Why Dogs are better than Cats.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Good girl Charlie-Mae, you have given some great reasons as to why dogs are better than cats. I am on your side, I prefer dogs too!
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Miss Gill.
Thanks for sharing this great blog post Charlie Mae. I also agree with you about dogs being my prefered choice. I love how they get so excited to see you when you arrive home...if you've had a tough day this is always heartwarming.
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